Comments : Empty sky

  • 9 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Such Emotion. So much suffering to ease one's pain. You had me at the beginning.
    Such creativity. Truly Amazing!

  • 9 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Beautifully written poem. Sad, but truly one of the best Ive read. You did great on this one.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lioness

    I REALLY love this poem. Strong words, well written. I love the part where you are bidding your tears but they come out in your blood. Very deep

    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    This tugs at my heart something serious, I can remember feeling like this at one point in time. A broken heart can do some much damage, especially when the person intends to. But I've learned that no one is worth the price of your life, there's always something else something better waiting for you. Brilliant work!
    Take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Whatever works

    Some really strong emotion here, poured out from within
    this piece is filled with such sorrow... but it was nicely written
    empty sky i like that title good job