Comments : Winter's Song (Tanka)

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Your poem gives my mind a view..somewhere i would love to be. Even short and simple choice of words could bring such beautiful image..guess that's the magic you have. Great write friend.

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice tanka. Made me cold just reading it. Nice images of winter.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You have captured well the mood of winter
    in this Tanaka..well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    Cindy, your poem was fabulous in the contest and I was really taken away with it. Your images that you made me think of were beautiful and this poem was a close tie to second just to let you know! :] The flow of the poem was incredible and you seemed to know which words would be most effective in such a small piece! :]

    All in all, I was impressed with your poem from start to finish and I am really glad that you gave my competition a try! Hope to see some more tankas by you in the future! Great job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This poem is almost as beautiful as the person that wrote it :] you're a gem hun and so is this wonderful piece. Nice work. Nik

  • 13 years ago

    by Hebe

    Liked it alot!