Unsound

by Beautiful Chaos   Mar 3, 2011


It's hard to be vulnerable
Tender to touch and feeling
Giving over again
Letting trust slowly seep from your marrow

Time can breed contempt
Distaste for failure
Though a broken heart is not failure
It is regret

Remorse for what was lost
Ignorance of what was gained
An introduction of fear
The mortar of self destruction

Walls locking in everything you need to let go
Not allowing you to see past your pain
Keeping out all you search for
To live with ghosts

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  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Remorse for what was lost
    Ignorance of what was gained
    An introduction of fear
    The mortar of self destruction

    ^^ This stanza really got me....all 4 things I've been through and felt....perfectly described!

    Yet another great poem for you. Id like to drag this on and exaggerate it , but this was one of those poems where I'd really just say, great work! I really really enjoyed it!

  • 13 years ago

    by shadow

    I agree very much with this.

    "It's hard to be vulnerable. Letting trust slowly seep from your marrow. Walls locking in everything you need to let go. Not allowing you to see past your pain."

    That captures it perfectly. Nicely written.

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