Rapid Oxidation

by Su   Mar 14, 2011


Why does love consist in a world without any care?
Did my fiery heart just summoned another flare?
It's been so long since i felt fire like this,
For a spark that I simply couldn't resist.

From winter snow to summer rain,
My heart kept libraries full of pain.
Until the moment you interfered,
An indescribable feeling reappeared.

But the ignition felt too short to be true.
Was it just me, or did you felt it too?
This state of mind is beyond my control,
My heart sinks and waits for the story to unfold.

Maybe I am just a profound dreamer,
Beyond what a perfectionist's can dream.
Maybe you never felt half of what I did,
And thought everything was only a scheme.

Even this time around, I am still the same.
Still wondering why love comes with flames.
The burning desire to find and to reveal,
Questioning what is love and if it's even real?

~Su

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  • 13 years ago

    by Su

    Please edit for me.
    i'm opened to bad comments

    what i can improve! thanks!