Another well done piece from you. Finally exploring your talents, hah? There is not a single word I dislike from this piece. They were all properly placed, and structured perfectly. Well done dahling!

Yaki,

again this is another stunning piece. I feel them from your heart. The simplicity grasps my attention as always and I adore the bittersweetness of your words. Such elegance.

I find this to be one of the best you've written in a while because it has that emotional impact that connects the reader to your words.

A beautiful poem.
Mel.