Comments : Golden Girl

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This wasn't explicit :p this was like a nature poem. Very vivid and beautiful. Nothing trashy about it. I loved the diction in this piece. Very informational as well. Nice work deary. :] -Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thanks for your comments! I wrote this one a little while after I moved back to Florida recently.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I liked the mixture of nature and sensual
    feelings in this poem..it flows with a touch of
    desire...very nice!

  • 14 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Easily got carried away in the poem. enticing.