Comments : Whiskey Drowns (Etheree)

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on the Etheree form for the club challenge Nitin.
    When someon is depressed and drinking this gives them feelings that are false. then after they wake up with the headache and hangover they realize once again it didn't cure anything.
    Nice writing
    Love Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I agree with Cindy, good job with the form. Drinking doesn't solve any problems, just creates more for a person.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Whiskey burns blurring memories
    Fractured confidence disconnected

    I could really relate to those two lines. I don't drink and don't plan on drinking because I've seen what it has done to my family and I don't want to be another nail in the coffin. I think this piece was very well written. I loved your diction. Nice work deary. -Nik

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Excellent work. I regret that I have already used my votes

  • 12 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    No clue what an etheree is...maybe why I don't write like this......should probably look it up :) that aside, your poem was good....written as though you were stoned when you wrote it.....Id say drunk, but I have yet to find someone who's brilliant...or even simply thinking deep when in that state of mind haha

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yeah...drinking does not solve anything; just
    makes one numb giving them a false sense of
    happiness to forget all...good job on the ethree!