Great job on the Etheree form for the club challenge Nitin.
When someon is depressed and drinking this gives them feelings that are false. then after they wake up with the headache and hangover they realize once again it didn't cure anything.
Nice writing
Love Cindy

I agree with Cindy, good job with the form. Drinking doesn't solve any problems, just creates more for a person.

Whiskey burns blurring memories
Fractured confidence disconnected

I could really relate to those two lines. I don't drink and don't plan on drinking because I've seen what it has done to my family and I don't want to be another nail in the coffin. I think this piece was very well written. I loved your diction. Nice work deary. -Nik

Excellent work. I regret that I have already used my votes

No clue what an etheree is...maybe why I don't write like this......should probably look it up :) that aside, your poem was good....written as though you were stoned when you wrote it.....Id say drunk, but I have yet to find someone who's brilliant...or even simply thinking deep when in that state of mind haha

Yeah...drinking does not solve anything; just
makes one numb giving them a false sense of
happiness to forget all...good job on the ethree!