Comments : When Will It End (Etheree)

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Intelligent write is what i would call it.
    Nutshell feelings captured in 10 lines.
    Everything about this is so true.
    Great write my friend.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice Etheree Cindy and Connie is right, could't have come at a more appropriate time. The world of the internet allows people to take freedoms with the truth, become something or someone they are not. Good job.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kiko

    Very nice job with the form... and so appropriate.

    BTW "viscous" should be "vicious."

  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I think a lot of us feel this way. When will the negative things go away. Great poem dear :] Thanks for introducing me to this form. -Nik

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Lovely title, almost like a hypothetical question because we all know drama usually never ends, because people will just continue to feed on it time & time again, because they strive to live off of it. I would have to agree with the comment above, this is definitely appropriate, considering recent events. One thing is for sure though, you can't let it get to you though because it's not worth it. Nicely done!

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Cindy... this poem is amazing! I loved it! First, I love the structure of the etheree, and you've written such a great poem using that structure. I think the topic and your choice of words were perfectly chosen... The adjectives really show the emotions that people go through... and I loved the title "When will it end" ... amazing! Well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How true and you have written this ethree with such elegance. It rhymes as well as
    flows so well from start to finish! Excellent write Cindy!

  • 8 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Cindy,

    to be able to write formed poetry itself requires genius. and you made it rhyme so naturally!! wow!!

  • 8 years ago

    by debbylyn

    You did well with this form...and the rhymes are great too! The content is very relevant to the current state of things here at P&Q!

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    The form is intriguing, of course I have to try it now ;-)

    You seem to have lanced a carbuncle.

    Congratulations for the purity of the message, unmixed with diatribe.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Brilliant write Cindy ... loved the form...
    so powerful and expressed really well. Seems I have to catch up on a lot of things :)

  • 8 years ago

    by June

    Good to see your still writing, and you have not lost it.

  • 8 years ago

    by mira

    In love it
    it just talking about evry thing in avery simpel way
    nice write

  • 8 years ago

    by Poetess

    I've missed you, Cindy. I love this poem. I think it's an experience we all go through in this cyber world.

    Love you,
    Liz :)

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    Cindy, this is a well penned and beautiful.Your words chosen were to the point.
    Nice form also.
    Paul...

  • 7 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    I think this poem is excellent !It has form and substance ........the intent and motives of ones character reflects in the poetry and everything else on the site -voting,commenting,praising ...........and the friendship bonds formed.........'Who's behind vicious intent'-sometimes it feels as if a syndicate undermines the integrity of the site and manipulate with evil intent-'.......marionette..........but those strings can break !(Just my interpretation.-excellent

  • 6 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Hi Cindy , this is good poetry. It touches the true life experiences.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A clever piece in form and content. Well done Cindy and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by =The-Fairy-Mary-Poppins=

    I love this one, it's relatable, simple in it's own way, truthful to every extent, and finally makes you want to keep on reading to the last word because you know that it's so true! God I wish I could make a poem like this short but filled with so many visuals and emotions. I love this poem it's going to my favorites poem list!

    - Moria Bella Bair

    P.s. thank you for reading my poem! Have a lovely day.

  • 3 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    'Shattered emotions, broken souls,
    orchestrating each marionette.'

    What a great line Cindy, and the whole poem is perfect!
    I read it several times, getting more from it at each reading. Good work!