Nice Etheree Cindy and Connie is right, could't have come at a more appropriate time. The world of the internet allows people to take freedoms with the truth, become something or someone they are not. Good job.
Lovely title, almost like a hypothetical question because we all know drama usually never ends, because people will just continue to feed on it time & time again, because they strive to live off of it. I would have to agree with the comment above, this is definitely appropriate, considering recent events. One thing is for sure though, you can't let it get to you though because it's not worth it. Nicely done!
Cindy... this poem is amazing! I loved it! First, I love the structure of the etheree, and you've written such a great poem using that structure. I think the topic and your choice of words were perfectly chosen... The adjectives really show the emotions that people go through... and I loved the title "When will it end" ... amazing! Well done!
Cindy, this is a well penned and beautiful.Your words chosen were to the point.
Nice form also.
11 years ago
by ronel mccarthy
I think this poem is excellent !It has form and substance ........the intent and motives of ones character reflects in the poetry and everything else on the site -voting,commenting,praising ...........and the friendship bonds formed.........'Who's behind vicious intent'-sometimes it feels as if a syndicate undermines the integrity of the site and manipulate with evil intent-'.......marionette..........but those strings can break !(Just my interpretation.-excellent
I love this one, it's relatable, simple in it's own way, truthful to every extent, and finally makes you want to keep on reading to the last word because you know that it's so true! God I wish I could make a poem like this short but filled with so many visuals and emotions. I love this poem it's going to my favorites poem list!
- Moria Bella Bair
P.s. thank you for reading my poem! Have a lovely day.