by Jaymi Lynn Apr 24, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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A kiss blown is a kiss wasted, |
by Decayed
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So, between Love & Lust.. Love is the winner :) |
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Your first stanza was perfection. You got a bit off the track when you really began to open up your feelings. But over all I thought it was a really good poem. Sweet and loving |