Before we fully blossom

by East Poetry   Apr 30, 2011


I know that I'm not perfect,
can improve in many ways.
And surprise myself sometimes,
on the hang ups I still wage.

If it feels... I'm hesitant,
or not fully on my way.
To giving you commitment,
in every act or thing I say.

I want you to know I'm sliding,
and its directly into you.
Where I promise at the bottom
Our splash it will ring true.

Oh can you wait, can you wait,
and enjoy this slide with me?
The thrill of being us,
And as often as can be.

all in all I wonder,
can the both of us hold trust?
break through new ground of togetherness
As time waters the seed of "US".

To always communicate wants,
bridging gaps before we cross them.
For it'd be a tragedy to lose "US"
before we fully Blossom.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Before we fully Blossom"
    A very eye-catching title. Just capitalize the first letters.

    'If it ever feels... I'm hesitant,
    or not fully on my way.'

    That is nice. The ellipsis is just well-placed! It's like the narrator really is hesitant. Great job

    The rhymes and simple word choice was just great. Keep writing
    -X

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I can't tell you how much I can relate to this poem you wrote. Which is why I love it so much. <3

    "
    What it boils down to,
    is can the both of us hold trust?
    That we can break through new ground,
    As time waters the seed of "US"."

    That's always the big question when it comes to relationships honestly..5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    I really love this poem of yours.

    I want you to know... I'm sliding,
    and its directly into you.
    where I promise there's a bottom
    and a splash it will ring true.

    ~ Yes, love can sometimes feel like sliding. You can't control it and it will fall faster and faster.

    5/5!

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