This was sooo good...i loved the fourth stanza...it was the kinda line that sticks out. good job girlie! ^_^

Aww wow! Goob this poem made me smile :) it's such a feel-good poem! I loved it... So inspiring and motivational! The ending was perfect... and I completely agree with the fact that you can create your own happiness. Beautiful words. Great job my friend :)

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD JOB!!!
That makes it EXCELLENT job!!

I so liked it..

Wow nice write i really love it so emotionel
well done

Too true. You are the only person who gets to decide how you feel.

A sweet write, very good vocabulary. 5/5

mandy :)

So true. The last stanzasay it all:
Good things will arrive
To those who patiently wait
Within myself feelings derive
My own happiness I can create

My perspective is slightly different - We would not realize what is happiness until we learn how to make other happy, selflessly. It is in others happiness (near & dear included) that we will find our happiness.
Great write.