I want a reason to smile.

by Sincerly Rachel   May 8, 2011


Happiness.
I need it,
I want it.
I crave it.

Depression.
I feel it,
I hate it.
I don't want it.

Love.
Screw it,
I'm fine with out it.
I long for it.

Skinny.
I want it,
I work for it.
I'll stop eating for it.

** not finished yet.. **

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  • 12 years ago

    by cedric

    I agree with the last comment. very good start. but hon, please dont starve yourself.

  • 12 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I know you said this isn't finished, which is good because it has a lot of potential. But I just wanted to say it's a very good start, and I love the format. I also love how some of them conflict with each other, very creative. I can't wait to read it when it's finished. So I'm not voting yet because I believe I shouldn't vote till it's done. But it is very good so far just thought you should know.