Comments : I will be waiting here

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very unique style with sensual imagery and romatic sentiment . What more could I ask for?

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwww. awesome. simple writing... i really loved it. so smiply expressed. no doubts the flow was so good. great poem..

    I will be waiting here
    For your silence to break
    For your soul to shake
    For your love to wake

    its my favourite stanza.... i loved it alot... its the the same wish that i want to my love

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    ..... I'll b waitin here...... simply superb... if in words feelings cud b expressed, dey cud get no better dan diz poem of urs, its d best... plz change see to sea.... if it is not used on purpose...

    Keep sharin.... ur thoughts put @ poems r wonderful... keep it up...;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    ..... I'll b waitin here...... simply superb... if in words feelings cud b expressed, dey cud get no better dan diz poem of urs, its d best... plz change see to sea.... if it is not used on purpose...

    Keep sharin.... ur thoughts put @ poems r wonderful... keep it up...;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Adele

    Very lovely...

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    It was very beautiful. I loved the flow in this poem a lot. Truly Amazing!

  • 12 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    I loved this! a pleasant read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    You won't be waiting for long with such a piece am telling ya ;) :D ...

    This piece is beautiful Girl .. Keep'em commin.

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, I love this poem! I can really relate to the feeling of "waiting" especially at the moment actually... I loved the repetition of "I will be waiting here" .. I think it made the flow so well and the overall poem was amazing. Great job! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by hisxgurl

    Awesome gurly! Heart touchin. Kudgw ( :
    ofcourse 5 outa 5

  • 12 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Simple words that convey a deep feelings...:) Keep it up..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nevi

    This poem was exceptional. Best thing I've read in a long long time. It was simple, but it had an amazing flow, and I could feel it pulling me in. especially:

    I will be waiting here
    For the ships to sail on the sea
    For the clock to strike three
    For you to believe in me

    My favorite part of the entire poem, I've had some things going on in my relationship. and this part sent shivers down my spine. 5/5 definitely on my favorites list

  • 12 years ago

    by Nevi

    This poem was exceptional. Best thing I've read in a long long time. It was simple, but it had an amazing flow, and I could feel it pulling me in. especially:

    I will be waiting here
    For the ships to sail on the sea
    For the clock to strike three
    For you to believe in me

    My favorite part of the entire poem, I've had some things going on in my relationship. and this part sent shivers down my spine. 5/5 definitely on my favorites list

  • 12 years ago

    by Nevi

    This poem was exceptional. Best thing I've read in a long long time. It was simple, but it had an amazing flow, and I could feel it pulling me in. especially:

    I will be waiting here
    For the ships to sail on the sea
    For the clock to strike three
    For you to believe in me

    My favorite part of the entire poem, I've had some things going on in my relationship. and this part sent shivers down my spine. 5/5 definitely on my favorites list

  • 12 years ago

    by Nevi

    This poem was exceptional. Best thing I've read in a long long time. It was simple, but it had an amazing flow, and I could feel it pulling me in. especially:

    I will be waiting here
    For the ships to sail on the sea
    For the clock to strike three
    For you to believe in me

    My favorite part of the entire poem, I've had some things going on in my relationship. and this part sent shivers down my spine. 5/5 definitely on my favorites list

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    What can I say..I got teary eyed reading it. I can relate. Very great poem<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    I love the sensual imagery..
    romantic poem..i love it

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    And again just

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Amazing !!!

  • 10 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Read one of my favorites again since '11 and still love it.

    • 10 years ago

      by Meme

      One of my favs too :)
      Thanks!