Yes we have to be who we are and not turn into somebody who we aren't! I like the confidence and the courage this poem potrays...very well done!! Just one thing, there is a typo in this line: never will I fallow..
instead of never will I follow..
Yes, I agree. True happiness is always found deep within the person itself and never in the outside world. It is the ego that makes us long for outside confirmation of our self-worth and when we fall into that trap, we keep on going from applause to applause and never feel the emptiness beyond.
Excellent poem and it has a very deep meaning and every word is conceived with the originality and truth. We often think that we have to work hard to earn our place in the society and we focus on things which have lass meaning in our life and often we ignore little things which are very important in our life. We think we have to follow the latest trend to being accepted in the society and without our realization we start doing things which we never use to do and when we realize we are a new creation of society created with greed, selfishness and gluttony. Lives is short and live your life as you want and never change yourself for anyone because the person who truly loves you will accept you and love you the way you are. My comment might not sound relevant to the poem but I just want to say what I felt after reading this poem. Keep up the good work Kelleyana.
3 years ago
The in depth meaning of this poem is fabulous, I loved the flow. I wish there was more people like this :)