Comments : Who i am

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Kel we should always celebrate who we are not who others think we should be. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes we have to be who we are and not turn into somebody who we aren't! I like the confidence and the courage this poem potrays...very well done!! Just one thing, there is a typo in this line: never will I fallow..
    instead of never will I follow..

  • 8 years ago

    by Brookexox

    I hate it when people tease others for being different...it's not right. i love your poem, all people should understand the message, and know ur always as good as you can be:) Wow. Love the poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    I believe that one should love and appreciate oneself, always, and Kel know you are loved. Great Poem!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I have read of so much sorrow and pain through poetry. This was wonderful and refreshing. Totally inspiring in every way
    Connie

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Yes, I agree. True happiness is always found deep within the person itself and never in the outside world. It is the ego that makes us long for outside confirmation of our self-worth and when we fall into that trap, we keep on going from applause to applause and never feel the emptiness beyond.

    I am glad you have found yourself:)

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Karan

    Excellent poem and it has a very deep meaning and every word is conceived with the originality and truth. We often think that we have to work hard to earn our place in the society and we focus on things which have lass meaning in our life and often we ignore little things which are very important in our life. We think we have to follow the latest trend to being accepted in the society and without our realization we start doing things which we never use to do and when we realize we are a new creation of society created with greed, selfishness and gluttony. Lives is short and live your life as you want and never change yourself for anyone because the person who truly loves you will accept you and love you the way you are. My comment might not sound relevant to the poem but I just want to say what I felt after reading this poem. Keep up the good work Kelleyana.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    The in depth meaning of this poem is fabulous, I loved the flow. I wish there was more people like this :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Lovely deep read

    Michael

  • 2 years ago

    by Sampreeth kotian

    Amazing write ! Just loved the flow and rhythm !!!

  • 1 month ago

    by William Mae

    A beautiful poem, how can others love us until we love ourself. Very well written