Waw, i like this. You create a vivid image that protray a bound between two loving souls that are bound from the heart. This is so well written and rare times i have seen lines of french words that blends so good with english. I crave for more. When you felt it, how was it, this feeling? It would only make the french sentence more powerful. I think you should write a part 2. I enjoy my read, very well done, kel.

There is a smootheness to this write and it
flowed so passionately..from the heart. Beautifully penned :)

I have definitely fallen in love with this piece. Your words keep swirling around in my mind making every beautiful vision you speak of. You have taken love poems to another level. Absolutely brilliant!
Take care

Perfection.

Wow, this is so heartbreaking but so beautiful. It's like trying to let someone you dearly love go and forgetting everything and the only thing you choose to remember is how you felt it. The person and their love soon subsides, but you feel what you once had. Great job. Keep it up.

I know many will quote their favourite verse here, but I just loved all of this. Powerful phrasings to reflect the most powerful form of sharing and giving!

I too loved each and every line. You have your own style and it's brilliant. I will read much more of your work as time allows.
Super talented poetess
Connie