Reading this gives such a sinister and dark
feelings and such vivid images came to my mind. There is also a tone of sadness to it like there is no hope..a helpless feeling. Very well penned!

Well, this has to be one of the better dark poems that I have ever read on this site. Your descriptions are incredible and it makes the imagery vivid with color and life that you paint onto this poem. The message was interesting because I thought at first you were the one who had gone to the darkness but then at the end I am twisted and see that you are actually leaving it. Very interesting as it caught me off guard. The poem flowed really good and I also noticed the rhyming was flowing with the poem as well. It didn't seem forced or anything. :]

All in all, the poem had a strong central theme of describing this darkness and then showing you leaving it for all the bad things that are in it and then you condemn those who are in it because of their ignorance. The poem really was a excellent story that gives many emotional flurries and images throughout the body as the poem is read. A very talented poet you are. Great job and keep writing!

Very Well Written, but be careful not to fall sympathetic for the angel of darkness!