Meet Me By

by Hadley Anne   Jun 11, 2011


Meet me by the still, cool lake
Upon the cold, soft sand.
Sit down on the dock with me
And in silence, hold my hand.

Kiss me as the breeze does blow
Through my gentle hair.
Love me as we part again
For stay we do not dare.

Keep me warm in your arms
As the water slaps against our feet.
Let me know I'm dearly loved
By promising again to meet.

Softly whisper in my ear
Of love so brave and true.
Look me in the eyes and
Say to me, "I'll forever love you."

Allow me to on your shoulder cry
Of woes and troubles deep,
For I require healing
From deep within heart's keep.

My lands lie in drought
Brought by lack of rain.
Give me hope, lift my soul
And my trust shall you attain.

My walls are guarded closely,
With watchmen at every gate.
They keep the false ones out
While I search for my mate.

So meet in the briar patch
Or kiss me in the wood.
I've come running to your arms
While forever here you've stood.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Colm

    This si a good attempt for one of the first poems on the site. What I will say is that there are probably hundreads or thousands of poems like this on this site alone. While the sentiments in this poem may be strong and true, theres nothing original in it for the reader, its not hugely interesting or thought-provoking. Ill give you the advise to not get hung up about rhyme. Poems dont have to rhyme, most contempory ones dont. Especially in abab format. Parts of this seem forced and the wording is obviously arranged to follow a rhyme scheme. eg 'For stay we do not dare.' - It sounds here a little confused, I thought to myself 'shouldnt that be we dare not stay?'
    Saying that, it was a decent effort, and there is some potential there. But try to make your poem original and try steering away from rhyming too often. Good luck keep writing
    Colm

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