Comments : Superficial life

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Life is such superficial

    I like the repetion of this line and it is so true; people nowadays just say things with a smile but their words are not genuine. Liked the read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Too true!
    very good poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Thank you my friend....

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Dark expressions, very moving and sad. A wonderful write. I liked this stanza the best amidst the dark sentiments:

    Drowning in the past
    Feels so real the smiles
    Life is such superficial
    We cry for the smile
    So that we can again smile

    It carries a glimmer of hope in our darkest hours.