After Forever

by Heather   Jun 28, 2011


Why'd you have to go...?
Why??
Tell me!
You left me out here in this big world that doesn't even matter if you're...gone..

You were my friend,
my love,
my life, all I ever wanted, all I ever needed!!

I am so mad at you darlin...*sniff*
Please jus tell me why you left?
All you have to do is come back to life and tell me..
It's simple...jus open your eyes!
Pleassssse...please darlin..I can't live without you! I don't want to...I love you so much baby..

Come back to me, please..?
I'm begging you
Jus...just please....

Baby?

Oh God, what I would give to jus hold you in my arms again
To feel the warmth of your body against me
To kiss your lips..
Hold your hand....
To jus...be with you!!
I would give anything for one more chance to look into your eyes again and say "I love you."

I....I love you....

Darlin..?

Baby???

Answer me please....

I won't tolerate your silence!
I won't!.....I......I won't

*sigh*....

......*sniff*

I love you so much baby...*tears**

I will never let go of Our love..
It's still here
And it always will be...even after forever

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    There is a few thing I could say to falut the flow of the poem but I ain't this was written with so much passion and true emotion you cant fault anything that comes from the heart a very good write the more you write and see other peoples work you will be amazing great words so powerful x

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather

    Ah, I really wanted some feedback on how to make it better! Thanks so much :))

  • 12 years ago

    by Just a Voice

    Its difficult to fault something so obviously heartrending. The poem is posted for critique and may I respectfully suggest that 'matter', in the first stanza, be changed to 'care'. I'm also not sure about the lay out and spacing at the end of the poem. I do understand the dramatic nature of the theme, but the content is so powerful. It doesn't need embellishment. Indeed I feel that pulling the words close together adds to their effect. This is well written and so tragic. It gets its message across. Bravo!

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