This is very touching :), you dream of a life that everyone deep inside does dream of..
sounds more like heaven, cause in our life these days its so hard to have the freedom I felt in your words, and the peace I sensed..and the love I touched..
but thats what poetry is about, well done, I am touched by this, a poem from the heart---to the heart
5/5

Breathtaking x 5/5 you will get the life with a heart likelike yours x

I love this piece. It was enjoyable.. Tender and brilliant! :D

Awww. what a good and nice dream of life... i love it really. so simple and true. and every on in this world want to make true this dream in life.. rhyming was also good.

i dream of life
aswell :)

Wow evry simpletonz dream...:) so wonderfully played wid poetic words...
5reamz come tru but only 4 a lucky few...
Keep it up...:)

Agn a masterpiece,5/5..

Maybe because I am dream of a life like this at the very moment..
This poem was so sincere,
Flowed nicely
I loved the tenderness and sweetness in this piece..
I couldn't have expressed it better myself..

Lovely lovely lovely poem!
I adoreddd it!