by Kilpatrick Jul 2, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Waiting for things to fall in place.Moving through time as the outsider now. watching things flip like channels. Searching through for something more interesting. Surfing played out emotions. Redundant reruns of memories. Good ones almost impossible to find. Blood soaked dreams. Tears from mothers who gave up long before you came. The sadness was passed through generations and never goes away while standing thousands of miles away from everything. Leaving marks on the world requires your own deep wounds. Episodes will always come and it will always be different. |
by Midnight Sun
First of all congratulations on your win! The poem was amazing :) You don't have the 15 poems I promised to comment on but I'll comment on all of the ones that you do have. |