Oh I love the true presence of the ending...how you can't contemplate yet what sweetness truly is, if it is lasting in form or just an old thing passed away.

Well-crafted emotions- I like that description of the kiss being like an apple, or maybe a rotted one, giving me that feel of forbidden temptations....you bring that reality back.

God bless and keep writing!
~MaryAnne

I like the representation of the poem's title..
So deep and the images are cool!

Great job

I find the feeling of doubt and confusion in this piece, interesting. I loved that it was suspenseful and romantic all in one. Good work, Jenn!

This is interesting, but in a good way. Nice job.