This would make a good song :) I like it the dark tone of this piece.

And welcome to Pnq :)

I love how you repeated, "To Write Love On Her Arms." It shows the meaning of this poem. Very nice, and very true. 5/5

I love it...
it hurts but so true...
it cud be a good song...

I loved this Ana,great

Fantastic! 5/5