Perfect night

by P o e m e l o   Jul 26, 2011


Why I cant get you out of my mind?
and there are times I want to call you mine.
Why at first I never felt this?
this feelings that I cant resist.

I want to tell you soon,
in midst of night, the only witness is the moon,
with the candle light that stood surround,
with the singing birds that gives romantic sound.

Keep this red roses as my true love,
this red wine's taste as my absolute trust,
As I whisper the word I LOVE YOU,
loot at my eyes, its definitely true!

A love you can't compare to none,
that will never fade nor gone,
a trust that can never break easily,
this sweet words I promise with loyalty.

Let me hold your hands for this cold night,
let me love more than my life,
let me be your King and loyal knight,
and let you be the Queen for this perfect night.

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  • 11 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Haha thanks for wonderful comment .. i now inspire to make some again after i read your poems..

  • 11 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Haha thanks for wonderful comment .. i now inspire to make some again after i read your poems..

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow! Bravo!!!! your poem is very very sweet and very very beautiful....I have nothing to see but only appreciation from this poem..very touchy to the heart....
    However, please look some lil words:2nd line in the 2nd stanza, something wrong in the flow...and 3rd stanza Loot---look"....but over all---well penned! and great poem...can I put it as my fav poem?5/5

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      I just sign in now Yrem Crish. Thank you for your comment. I appreciate that you wanted to be your favorite, wow I'm so flattered. Thank you very much. I'll take heed with your advice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Indeed, nothing can compare to the beauty of Love. This is really sweet and wonderfully written. God bless you!!!

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