Hey O think this is a very nice poem 5/5 :)

Bear me to that edge of glory
laying within the most majestic
sadness ever tuned

^
now you are the one having me wanting to say the F word...

this one is some what simplistic
from what i am used to from you,

i mean as in the wording and structure...
but the meaning behind it was strong
i love how you twisted the whole theme
the song has going on..

and turned it into something so sad and heartfelt...

and there for you are getting a nomination :)!

hugs

U no wat intrigued me most.the diction nd tone of this piece.the poem is simply amazin

Congrats on the 2nd place :D

here's my review:

You here penned a flawless piece. It was just so perfect in all its aspects.. Structurally, Flow-wise, grammatically, and originality-wise.. It was perfect.
It's like a piece written from ages. I love these variety of thoughts structured well into this poem.
It's close to the edge of personal philosophy :)
It's carved well with its vivid images and mature thoughts..
It needs to be read more than once to grasp the exact meaning, and it'a definitely winning method!
Very well done.
5/5

Viva for powerpuff girls indeed!!!! hahhahhaaa
omgggggggg no wonder this won the second place for sure after mine :PP:P kidding mine sucks!

this write tho it is personal but it is verrry inspirational and powerful,,,,good work my heart bravo amazing!