Cool poem i liked it

Oh,

it has been a while since ive read such
a simple yet deep poem...

i could tell you were probably drowning in emotions when you wrote this..

like you couldnt take it anymore
and you poured your heart out on paper...

though i do not get why you have some loose words

as if you wanted to create that 'cliff hanger'
effect,

the flow wasnt that bad,
just different...

overall it was a great poem..
full of emotion,
some very simple yet complex phrases here and there...

made the poem a delight to read :)

- hug!

Love this!
I loved the flow
pouring emotions
5/5

Nevi,

I cannot say anything except that it was a gentle write, an enjoyable piece, inspirational and refers that you are way clever than you seem on the forums (not saying you don't seem clever on the forums but your poetry is cleverer than your posts...well, I mean... ok I'm gonna shut up, now. : P)

So, I was saying that the wording was smart, the whole atmosphere was indeed a delight to read, I agree with my Yackers.

Look forward to reading more of your poems! : D

Oh my...this is just wonderful! After I finished reading it the first time, I was left wanting more so I went back and read it a few times more! It held so much depth and power that anyone can see themselves in your words, I know I did. I love how the poem was laid out and your style is quite refreshing. I will look to read more poems from you. :) very well done!