by whisper Dawn Aug 2, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Time does nothing... to ease this pain.. |
by Exostosis
Nice piece. Time does nothing, true. We wait and we wait. And in time realize that we are trying to fill a void, that is carved with ones departure. |
This is good great flow great rhyme I enjoyed reading this though it's sad and I hated feeling the feeling that u just described and reading this practically brough those emotions back which is a good thing just means I can feel the poem...great job :) 5/5 |