This is great. :) Good job! I love the imagery.

Beautiful poem..excelent..lines r so beautiful..

Beautiful poem, indeed! Welcome to the site, you seem to have a talent, dear!

Keep it up!

Now this is a very fine love poem, a person can tell that it really is written with love. you cant fake that. nice one brother.

Great poem honestly, just gorgeous 5/5

Beautiful poem! I love your use of detail and description it has made this poem very powerful and effective
Great write!

I have to agree with the comments above. I think that this is a really nice and heartfelt write though I have to admit that it did not always flow perfectly. That does not matter as much though if the feeling described are honest and captivate the reader like they did in this piece.

This is really good nice choice of words wow well done :)

Yeah this poem Is kind of enchanting, sort of like a fairy tale, Good rhyms, nice job!

Real pure emotion i loved it 5/5

I can relate to this. a beautiful poem and the flow was stunning. Truly amazing!

I can relate to this. a beautiful poem and the flow was stunning. Truly amazing!

Excellent one! 5/5 for you!

This tickled my senses... so cute, I thought this type of poetry was lost and could only be read in old dusty books. Loved it, and the ending was so unexpected, I was so immersed in the beautiful description of the lady that I never expected her to be any different... It also shows that first impressions don't depend only on looks, some people just have an air about them which draws us to them.

This is really good 5/5 :)

I like your title. To be able to sleep at will is a strange beauty. I really like your poem.