Wow. Amazing piece. The imagery and metaphors are beautiful..

"But I am silent to taste alone
the bitterness of painful wounds."
I love this part. Very relatable to me..

Keep writing :) 5/5

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Thanks..xanthe...

I was only with myself
crying quietly;
trying to call for somebody,
but I was trapped;
My tongue clinched
at the tip of my teeth
I shout very hard
but there's nothing..
Nothing words came out at my very lips.

I enjoyed reading this poem and I couldn't help but relate to the above stanza. Well written, keep up the good work.

This is depressing but great, made me actually feel the emotions you wrote about. 5/5

Thanks!

I can totally relate to most of the words and metaphors in this poem.your very good at descriptive writing.keep up the great poems,love your quotes too.

Thanks for the comments:=)

I shout vry hard
but thereis nothing
no words came ....

cn t work that way if u wish to edit

A lovely poem, beautifully written.
A talented Poet.

This is wonderful. I like the way you used words, in a nontraditional sense. I don't know if it was purposeful, but they gave an effective disconnection from reality. I really liked it :)

Thanks...

Good work i can relate :)

I love this piece.. Alot of emotion was tied to this poem! Awesome write
5/5

Nice flow

Good job! It's great!

Awwww i love it.. i can really relate to this poem. because i also sometimes feel like i am alone in this world and no one seems to hear my cry for help and even bothers to care.. but within myself somewhere deep inside i find strength and that passion to keep going.. goood job:)

Really good poem i can relate to 100/100 :)