I love it...

Thank you(:

Superb !

Thank you sweetie(:

Great write your poems are getting better as you write the structure was improved good job :)

Dddaaannngggg!!! i love love love love LOVE IT!!! ESPECIALLY PARAGRAPH 3 AND 5!!! YOU TALENTED GIRL!!!

Thank you Hun<3 Lovee you! (:

Thank you so much jeet :)<3
im still new to it but trying my best!
and yeah i love him,but he doesnt deserve it!

You got it, don't waste your time to someone that never appreciate you...^_^' you deserve someone better...

Great poem, I really liked reading it. I didn't find anything wrong with the poem. It flowed perfectly.

Remember,
what we once were,
its all you can do now,
all that's left are memories,
of a boy and a girl,
who once were in love,
but now,
nothing but a distant memory,
that can never be again

enchating all your poems seem to be sad or hurt felt would be nice to see a happy one from you x :D

Beautiful. Well done.