Comments : The Climb

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is so good..i could feel the emotions in this poem. though it sad but it shows the fears of a lover..

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessie

    Amazing. short, to the point, but descriptive and powerful.
    "As lies lay down there sin."

    there? their? as lies lay down, they're sin?
    wasnt quite sure