A very beautiful theme for a difficult type of poetry style. Great job Jenni! You are a blooming poet now.

A classic style of poetry its not very offen i read Acrostic poems only ever wrote to my self .... anyway it was beautifully written all flowed really well cant really fault it well attractive piece x

Wow!! Jenni this is magnificent!! I love this. You have a great use of emotion and words and you take a plain style and make it extraordinary!! Fabulous!!

Jenni, what the hell!?

is that for the challenge I made in the club? Please tell me no because I will kill myself at the very moment if so because I asked to do an acrostic not....
not
NOT A DAMN MIRACLE

=p

this was really heartfelt and I am so happy I could let you guys try a different style of writing, you will all be so skilled after a while! :)
I agree with Tony that it was really classic, and side note to Tony: "YOU HAVE TO TRY IT!"

ok...

where should I start???
the title?
the long creative title??
that made the piece such an interesting crazy lovely beautiful small tall dunno what thing! :P
Pardon me but I am going crazy because I feel that my time and efforts for you guys are never wasted! and that everything I am doing is benefitting you! and that is making me really proud and ughh I am so so out of words! Gosh...help me!

you should feature this, Jen since it is your first amazing acrostic!
well-done, my next weeks nomination!

I loved dis one too ,like d rest

I thought this line was the center of the whole poem , it gave it a kick and brought it home

"Leave marks that will
encourage to be remembered"

:-) Connie

Jenni,

This was brilliant, I can't really do acrostic's that well, but you did this perfectly.

Absolutely 100% pure brilliance, I mean it, It was amazing!!!!!

love,
Tara-Kay

Wow just amazing, you have so many emotions in this poem I live it :)

Acrostic poems are hard to make, but very lovely to read!!

You did a very great job describing such Life problem..

I always seek to be known, and everyone of us loves to be popular, famous, known, at least!

Yearning for importance
or to be remembered,
underrated carelessness.
^ very nice long wording!
It gives so much depth.

And the closing was powerful too, it just made the whole idea stronger.
well done :D

5/5

Wow jenni nice write.it is jst splendid

Wonderful words penned for keeping our love alive in our memory, etrnally.

In particular the opening and the closing stanza's were powerful. Great relatable write.

I liked this poem. It is good. It make a good point. Flowed ok and is a good length. The wording was good. I see nothing worth fixing.

gave it a 5/5

Wikkid poem
a poem like this is definately life changing...
keep posting
and i'll keep reading:P

This one's reeeeeeeeally good :) :) i loved it.... keep up

I think I like this type of writtings:) and I like the theme too:)

Wow! pretty pretty good poem!! very deep. I had to read this poem several several time to really take it in.

This is great

Why give up something that
is worthy of being kept,

I really enjoyed this poem.

Love it 5/5

Love it