Comments : This sweet sorrow (Acrostic)

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You are amazing....truly undoubtedly..amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I agree, you are amamzing in your talent, and in your person

    love,
    Tara
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Good work in this piece, always an enjoyment to read your poems
    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Your awesome, you know that, and I`m always very proud of reading your poems, great job like usual x 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow magnificent job as usual! Because this is terrific!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Every one is gonna dissagree i though the writing was good but i didnt like the poem myself when reading it i have no idea y still a perfect write as always jen

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I must say this is a unique poem with a great message for someone with doubts (or perhaps someone who has lost courage). Each stanza is weighty and meaningful, but the last stanza carries the biggest punch:

    Seal those doubts,
    obviate their win,
    refuse to give up,
    recognize the sun in
    order to vanquish
    what blurs your vision.

    A write with a great optimism for someone.