Comments : Can you hear her

  • 10 years ago

    by MVP2011

    Amazing LOVE the poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love it!!

  • 10 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you guys :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is sad good :) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    OMG!!! Okay this is my fav poem by you! this piece is simply amazing! lol. Go Holly!!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mushh

    This is so sad, I actually had a lump in my throat reading it. It's beautiful <3 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by rochelle

    When i read your poem i cried my eyes out because i no how u feel

  • 10 years ago

    by Joe Forrest

    Wow is all i can say. That was such a strong emotion pouring out of every line. Simply Amazing. Wow.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is absolutely amazing!! You have done a magnificent job! The flow is nice, the word choice is pretty good. Though there is not too much imagery, emotion makes up for that. Emotion just totally overflows in this piece, and it is described so well!

    Can you hear her,
    as she pours out her soul,
    as she lets down her guard,
    exposes her heart to you,
    tells you her every last secret.

    This ^^ is my favorite stanza in this piece. I think it shows just how much she needs the person. It shows just how far people will go to get what they want, and even when they go as far as you can possibly imagine, yet it supposedly isn't good enough.

    Really I think that this piece is almost flawless. 5/5. Though I am sorry for the length.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    So powerful so captivating i loved this i no peopel that tryed to take there life but lucky one of my poems stoped her ... in emotion u have penned here is mind blowing your a real talent x

  • 10 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow foking awesome! it hit me inside, Love it

  • 10 years ago

    by brokenf4evermore

    All I can say is damn, Really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,and I mean REALLY Beautiful. Sad as hell,but so very beautiful.Its amazing to see how blessed some guys are to have a woman that cares that much about them and they don't deserve them.I don't know how much sense that makes but one more time-Sad but Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!