Amazing LOVE the poem :)

I love it!!

Thank you guys :)

This is sad good :) 5/5

OMG!!! Okay this is my fav poem by you! this piece is simply amazing! lol. Go Holly!!! 5/5

This is so sad, I actually had a lump in my throat reading it. It's beautiful <3 5/5

When i read your poem i cried my eyes out because i no how u feel

Wow is all i can say. That was such a strong emotion pouring out of every line. Simply Amazing. Wow.

Wow, this is absolutely amazing!! You have done a magnificent job! The flow is nice, the word choice is pretty good. Though there is not too much imagery, emotion makes up for that. Emotion just totally overflows in this piece, and it is described so well!

Can you hear her,
as she pours out her soul,
as she lets down her guard,
exposes her heart to you,
tells you her every last secret.

This ^^ is my favorite stanza in this piece. I think it shows just how much she needs the person. It shows just how far people will go to get what they want, and even when they go as far as you can possibly imagine, yet it supposedly isn't good enough.

Really I think that this piece is almost flawless. 5/5. Though I am sorry for the length.

So powerful so captivating i loved this i no peopel that tryed to take there life but lucky one of my poems stoped her ... in emotion u have penned here is mind blowing your a real talent x

Wow foking awesome! it hit me inside, Love it

All I can say is damn, Really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,and I mean REALLY Beautiful. Sad as hell,but so very beautiful.Its amazing to see how blessed some guys are to have a woman that cares that much about them and they don't deserve them.I don't know how much sense that makes but one more time-Sad but Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!