Connie,
This was really good, I loved the wording, it was great, the flow was good, and emotion visible.
love always,
Tara
xx

Connie, this is amazing. The way you transposed emotions of sadness into beautiful words, perfect. I only wish this was a happy one. Wonderful.

Amazing so powerful i hate stuff like this but u decribed it so awesome ... connie gawjus and talented :)

Powerful write, Connie, keep writing.

He towers above her tiny frame
tears blind her understanding
resolve begins to crumble.

^ I didn't understand how it's structure though I
can capture some great ideas!
so, I suggest:

"He towers above her tiny frame
tears that blind her understanding
as she embarks to crumble."

These dark thoughts are enjoyable to read.
A light meal with lots of pepper&spice :D

Great..
5/5

Great write..connie..

Wow this is amazing well done connie 5/5 xx

Wonerfully Penned, Bravo!!!

5/5

Another amazing piece. My favorite part
'Escaping into the world of
her mind she endures silently.'
So very true and well said. I could relate to this alot as I'm sure others can too. Very well put together and had a very strong ending. Leaves you thinking and wondering and hoping not many pieces can do that. Hope to read more great pieces by you. 5/5