We are.

by Black Heart Still Beating   Aug 21, 2011


Not strong.
We are, not strong.
We can!
We can not deal.
though you would never guess.
the things on our minds.
Tear at our seams,
ripping us.
yet no one sees
the pain that overflows
with claws so sharp.
they cut vulnerable flesh.
Pink Puckers,
Searing Scars we gain though time.
Will they heal,
or become a blemish that will never fully seal?
Do the masses notice them?
We wear them over our hearts.
We cry.
We cry brilliant blue
The spill over,
threatening to quench the spark.
Once We blazed,
Beacons in the black.
Blank we now stair,
into the depths of hell,
you will find our thoughts there.
Burn brightly they do,
those pits of smoldering fire.
They smolder with the depths of desire.
such passion in the depth of hell do thee see,
We jump,
and we fly,
through the air,
but not to the sky
We can!
We can not cope.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sean

    So much potential in your writing, like seriously :). Just needs a bit of polish but that takes time, i'll keep an eye on your work :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mushh

    I agree with Kristian, this is interesting, very interesting, I got quite a few things from this poem, for example, with most poems, you tend to catch on with the whole situation right away, but with this one, I didn't. I mean I got the basic, I think, But it made me question how many people were in this, if it was just one person with maybe a split personality one minute saying "yeah, we can" and then saying "no, we can't" or maybe i'm just looking too far into it hehe, either way, I'm extremely impressed! Really well done, 5/5 xx

  • 12 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    I love this

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is interesting :) it's good :)

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