Comments : Fair!!! (An English Sonnet)

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    A real masterpiece. Adoration personified. I am sure this is a winner in your love's heart and soul.

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Such a joy to read, as always!

  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Fair, thou art, like a rose, in its blossom.
    Like that, sweet, flower, you are, beautiful.
    There is no beauty, out there, as awesome.

    Really like the first three lines the most,
    you have an interesting style and your poems come across almost like slam poetry. kinda cool.

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great piece of beauty. I loved it. All lines, however are of 10 syllables except 7 & 11:
    'Your Beauty, Divine, in every Hue' (9 syllables) and 'Fairer than Fair, Perfect, Aesthetically' (11 syllables).
    This aside, I enjoyed the flow.