I like your choice of words and I think that this poem flows quite well. The first verse doesn't work that well though because it's wrong grammar wise. The emotions in this piece are really powerful though and I think that is important.

I collected the first verse..thanx for your observation Jenni..

Good heartfelt poem. The wording was ok and so was the flow though it was a little off. It was a good length.

"leave me aghast" try putting "leaving" instead of "leave".

"turpitude" and "ambiguous" seem to throw the flow of the poem off a little.

I gave it a 5/5

This is very hurtful cuz the emotion strikes with such force. their stong and yet senseible. great poem and in a way i can relate but im way past that i hope things will be better for u if this is ur true fellings. again great poem i really loved it :) 5/5

This poem moved me. It full with emotion and was a very tender piece.

This is really sad :( and you can really feel your emotions jumping from the page.

I love how the words flow into each other :)
5/5

I love it, so full of emotion..great piece ;) 5/5

Hey,

This poem is very bitter and emotional. You can feel every word expressed in this poem.

Its not clear anymore
My emotions have become ambiguous,
and so has my love for you
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

This stanza - so blunt and direct.

I love it

x

Although I'm not too sure about your choice in some of your words, this poem as a whole is very deep. Your anger and confusion flow out of every stanza so well. The feelings in here need not be stressed with strong vocabulary, but maybe with simpler words, to make the feelings more to the point.
Altogether, well done.