Lasting

by Brittany C   Aug 27, 2011


We will last forever
Because we love each other,
trust one another,
true to our selves.

I can tell you anything, everything
Talk of dreams and things we need.
Confiding in one another
Unlike what we have with any other.

We make each others dreams come true
Giving and taking equally.
Loving with out boundaries.
For our love is strong, forever glowing.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I like this poem because of the feelings they transmit and it seems really hear-felt keep it up :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    We will last for ever
    Because we love each other
    trust one another.

    ^ I think this stanza is quite nice because its message is really strong and it's a good introductory stanza as well because it states the current situation of two lovers: that they're in love. Just some suggestions: "forever" is one word and I'd recommend you to either insert a comma after other or "and" in the last line.

    I like the feelings in this poem because they are definately powerful. Your words may be simple but this simplicity underlines the love these two people share very well.

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