Love is Lovely

by Brittany C   Sep 1, 2011


Happiness envelops me
making my lips switch.
As I look in your beautiful eyes
and see your love for me glowing in them.

My love for him is overpowering
shinning through any doubts.
That tries to creep into my thoughts
but they never win.

Your love is an amazing thing
an sometimes over whelming thing.
It makes me smile when I really don't want to
and in a way it keeps me sane.

Love is an amazing thing
something to cherish.
It comes naturally
but sometimes it needs work.

A life of love is full of give and take
don't turn your back on it
for you may never find it again.
I found mine, what about you?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This poem is very sensual I really enjoyed it. I'm in love and have recently found it so I love reading about love.

    I'd like to suggest to you not capitalizing all of your stanza's. I started writing non rhyming poems a while ago and thats what I was doing, some other poems showes me how much better some comma's and non capitalized letters make your poem. I could show you if you'd like :)

    Other than that, I'd still give this a 5. Your feelings were very well shown!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    ^ Kristian is right.

    A very well written poem of yours. Keep going :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is really good and very truthful it hits hard for people with hatred in heart and are blinded with hate... It's really good I loved it 5/5 :)

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