That guard of mine

by Dezzy61811   Sep 2, 2011


At first I was afraid to love you.
You convinced me that there was nothing to be afraid of.
So I loved you.
You had stolen all of my love.
I finally put my guard.
Everything was doing fine and that guard of mine was gone forever.
We had our share of nasty fights that landed kind of hard.
I could feel that the guard wasn't completly gone,
There was still some left over.
But I will never for the time that you told me we were over.
I figured it was just another fight.
But the very next day all your stuff was gone.
You had boarded to vegas on the very next flight.
I tried recovering but I could never heal.
You got me hiding behind that guard but now it's made of steal.

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  • 14 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I totally agree with jenni ... but as your first poem i can tell you have the emotion and a good heart to write ... the flow wasnt the best but you have alot of time look at other poems ask for advice poeple here will be pleased to help ... i think you have potential .. and if you love writing you will be a good little poetess in no time :D keep writing

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a good start but this poem does not flow too well and I think that you used the word "guard" too often during this poem. The end of a verse does not necessarily mean the end of a sentence but I believe this is a really heartfelt write filled with emotions.