What can I say ! what's going on with you ? whatever it is, it's very positive, your work is only getting better and better and even better and as much as I loved your short poems I enjoy every single letter of your long ones, this was such a story, with such an impact and amazing concept..

For shoes,
are by far
a better accessory

^^

like breathtaking!
Well done yaki, hope you are proud!
5/5

^ Rania is right :)

YAKI, please keep on amazing me with your writes x]

Sorry to write this short comment yesterday!
I really LOVE this Yaki.

Like OMG I'm so in Love, I found this finally, you make me wanna' say, O-O-O-o_o-o-o-o-o-o-o--o-oOMG! :)

Yaki, this is not better than 'A poem for mama' but it's awesome!

Have you ever thought about writing novels? Well, you can do a great job, even write something similar to Twilight novels , and make movies, win million bucks $$ :)

(please call me if you want to make a movie after writing something. k? I want to act!)

Anyway,
though I was hurt by the ending (Are men really shoes? :p) I was taken by every sentence you've written.

Great maturity in your writing breath and awesomeness flows all over your images.

It's like a small story with a theme. And I ADORE poems that deliver a certain message!!

But I read it twice, and can I ask you:

- Who is that girl crying? (is it you when you're young?)

- Why does she have 10 days to live?

^ please pm me these answers, I'd really like to know.

Other than that, AMAZING!

5/5
and a nomination ;)

Win million bucks $$

^^^
WHAT

!!!?
excuse me Abed but I guess her work is PRICELESS!
no millions nor billions nor anything would suffice such a write and such ideas!

you are an amazing writer, yakzz, you dont only have a lovely voice but a wonderful soul too...call me more often haha! xD

:) Love you