This is beautiful! You have done a magnificent job! There is such a remarkable use of imagery and even a little symbolism (at least to me, so sorry.) I love the way you have it in third person, yet it shows everything the aduience could want to know; and still gives this girl some character. Your word choice is fantastic. I really think you have created a piece to perfection. I see no need for change or improvement in this piece, and I think it is so simple that it entices the reader. Overall 5/5 definatly!

Nominated !!

I relate soooo much and I love love love this poem :) :) 5/5

I thought this was beautiful and i told you ... you could write more then sad glad to see u trying new things its payed off x :D

Very nice blend of nature, beauty and wishful thoughts in this lovely poem. An impressive imagination.

I loved the metaphors and the way you used nature and beautiful passion in each sentence. I can relate, this is motivating and inspiring, magically written. 5/5