I liked this, Colm!

This was really well-written, held so many meanings! I LOVED the repetitions of "the rising sun" so damn much.
I'll nominate this the next week and will pop up with a longer comment, later on.
Good work!

I liked this poem. very evocative

The ending summed it all, this is a great way to remind how valuable our mothers are. :D

I love the reference to the rising sun. (: Very good piece of writing.

I'm probably going to read and comment on all your poems. Hope you're ready to read all those comments. Haha.

5/5

-Heather