A very sad love poem, but nonetheless, an honest one, and I really like honest poems that came from the heart. Anyways, aside from the "i"s, you did good here, real good.

Aamazing work, you could do well for a movie maker, producer lol, was able to picture up the scene ! LOVEd it, well done, I think this was well worded with a very honest tone and a very interesting one

5/5

I love this poem is so beautiful, yet so heartrending. You penned something truly wonderful. The emotion in this piece is spectacular. There are a few uses of imagery but not many, and none are in detail. Your flow is great. The word choice is wonderful. I love the fact you start off strong and stay that way through the entier piece. 5/5

Wow very heart felt and very touching :) awesome fantastic poem... great job :) 5/5

This is a great poem.... but if i am not wroing it should me in Sad catagory... that's what i think.. cuz it describes about being apart.. about hurting feelings... Words are so perfect... Poem describes everything so clearly as if i felt like i was in that situation... faboulas work.. this Stanza is so heart felt ..

Holding back my tears,
trying to stop my shaking,
i tell him I'm sorry i just can't do this anymore,
tears run down his face,
falling to his knees begging me to
not mean what I'm saying.

It shows how much love do you have between you two.. and it's really hard to be apart from your loved ones.. Great piece of work :):) 55/

Aww i love this poem 100/100