Imagine

This is superb and dark indeed! Brilliant rhythm and rhyme scheme throughout.

Wow....gets better and better......love it!

Wow....gets better and better......love it!

This is a beautiful, dark-tinted, and childlike, in a sense, piece. I like it. After the first line, I thought it would be more of a childlike poem, but it turned into a grown-up, darker imaginative write.

I am the adventurer, stealing the treasure
I am the cannibals, waiting in pleasure
I am the hero, defeating the troll
I am the parasite, drinking your soul

^^ I am a fan of your AA BB poetry. You seem to use it, and it works. It never sounds like it's forced or choking, and it all flows. This is something you really would hear comparisons of in poetry, and I think you are in a class of your own with writing like this. It's a new taste, and it's bitter - but I want more.

You have an outstanding way with imagery!

This was great! I got chills near the end, and it all fits so perfectly together. It was wonderfully written and It kept my attention the whole time i was reading it! I loved it!