Rain

by Something Diabolical   Aug 24, 2015


The rain heavy
The umbrella now alone
Cats and dogs arrive

A rippling puddle
The animals are laughing
A footstep away

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely written and good use of metaphors.
    Em

  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    The metaphors are brilliant.
    The way you have described the rain if powerful and strong, very vivid and easily imaginable.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good write - well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ahhh - I had wondered who wrote this lol!

    Nice entry to the challenge and great metaphor use of the cats and dogs.

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