Taking my chances

by The Po whet   Sep 11, 2011


Show me a perfect man
who has no flaws.
if he exists not, then I'm no different for
I'm human.

promises that are beyond my capacity;
like of heaven
I maketh not.
but that of my love I'll wholly fulfill.

I fear chasing you to eternity
cause it's like chasing the wind whose course I know not.

the sands of time fill the hour glass in earnest
so does my days upon this earth flies.
I'm no friend of loneliness for
I find no comfort in solitude.

let the moon weep in joy
and the stars shine down brightly on this night,
when you becomes forever mine.
the best gift to me, for taking my chances.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    "the sands of time fill the hour glass in earnest
    so does my days upon this earth flies.
    I'm no friend of loneliness for
    I find no comfort in solitude."
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    I think your work is wonderful, I love the stories it tells. If you would punctuate and clean it up just a bit, it would be marvelous in content.

    The above stanza was my favorite, I think it touched the heart of your poem
    Excellent Keep up the good works

    Connie