I love it :-) I can't believe how you can just pop a poem out of the air and have it sound so good. hehe and it's named after me LOL

hugs and I adore it

Connie

Hey, i think you out did yourself here
truly poetic, the flow was incredible and the rhyming scheme was beyond an average normal poet, i really do believe that with the level of skill you posses, you should be publishing
the image of sadness within these lines was very real, that I've felt it fully without having to even relate to it, and the repatison on your last santza served a huge purpose for me to grasp the full meaning of your tragedy.
unbelievable,
epic
magnificent
5/5
Nomination
and a weekly winner in my eyes.

FREE VERSE,RHYME...RANIA YOU ALWAYS ROCK IT ALL JEEZUS...

THE FLOW WAS FLAWLESS...I MEAN FLAWLESS
SO FLAWLESS IT COULD BE A SONG.

jeesus,Rania..I don't know...what to say..
you never prepare me emotionally for these kinda things..I am going to kill you!!!

'tiniest bone"

"die than age on my own'

who even...

rania,everyone knows you are amazing..
but What I need you to do is acknowledge within yourself how good you are..

I don't wanna hear you saying..

things like

"I thought it sucked"
or so ever again...

you are in my eyes one of the bestessssssttt
one of my favorites<3

I could never get enough of you and your poetry..

NOMINATED!

Rania Rania Rania what can I say you just rock girl :-)
Nicely done, it seems by the comments quite quick as well LOL. Excellent

PERFECTION ACHIEVED !!

This is deeply touching and very well written