You still got it Sylvia, a beautiful poem, wording and flow were perfection. The tenderness breathtaking.

Can I get a cigarette? :) very good

I like this form and moreover liked what you have written. Its so sweet yet passionate! Loved the read :)

I will have to agree with everyone, it is a very sweet piece. It is rather hard to stay within the bounds of a structure and still leave readers wanting more. The flow is fluid and carries the notion flawlessly.

Fervid, fierce, flaming and full of fondness to a fawn. Five/Five.